In the title you need to change "acrosstic" to acrostic. At the bottom of the piece I think you should leave the link to the other persons profile which you did this collab with so that people can also go vote and think comment on their poem aswel. I did think this piece was quite cute. Although to me it didn't have a strong flow. I loved the meaning you two portayed in this poem it was really sweet and caring. The word choice were simple yet effective and the style was a good pick. Well done none the less on creating an interesting poem. 5/5~mel

Simple and straightforward poem. "Your" should be "You're". Just a small thing. Nice job

Ahh cute poem, simpley made me smile! :) flowed great and nice wording. The meaning was adoreable. Enjoyed reading this!
5/5

Awww, Elaine! You have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this poem.. it was beautiful and it really showed your love for your best friend! In many ways, I can connect to this.. I thought about my best friend Amanda the entire time I was reading it. We've always together, always having fun, we're more than just friends.. we're sisters, practically twins or doubles actually =P

"Remembering memories from our sisterly love
Always laughing and having fun."

I would have to say that is my favorite lines from this poem.. I dunno why, I just feel very connected to these two.

Great job, Elaine!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

Well done, i loved this piece. it was awesome, showed love well and a good piece
love Tara-Kay
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