Comments : Random Outburst.

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Rofl. Great times.
    "she's stupid" no your not. *slaps her arm* lol it's kinda funny after all the stuff about Jake. Well pretty good for just randomness.
    Keep writing real poetry though. lol.
    your friend,
    Miranda

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Lol nice writing, even if it is random. It's a sweet poem, though, keep writing! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Francine

    Very good, you're not stupid though. True love can never be put into words, there's just not enough words that can express how strongly one feels at times. But this poems expresses that without find ing those words :)

  • 16 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I adore this poem. It's so sweet. Your boyfriend must be very lucky to have a girl with such an articulate tongue!!!
    I love the line:
    'The guy that laughs when she stumbles but gets jealous when other's help her.' Thats a wonderfully clever thing to say.
    Wonderful poem.
    Kat-x-

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Omg.. I cannot believe how wonderful and beautiful this poem was Elaine. I can connect to this poem in every single way possible, no kidding! When I was reading this.. =) I thought about one certain person the entire time. Hehe the one guy that is I love so much, to me he is like Jake to you pretty much. I try my hardest to write poems about him but what I write couldn't ever compare to him and my true feelings for him.. Awww, this one is definitely going on my favorites list Elaine!

    5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    RANDOM!!! This is my favorite type of poetry, poetry written from the heart and soul. You were spilling your true inside feelings when writing this and I love it becouse you can really tell the difference from a majority of the other poetry on here! May God Bless!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Yep. Randomness. LOL. Its so sweet and full of emotion from your heart. Keep writing and take care.
    I love you though. Love you unconditionally.
    So please love me back.
    Sweetness ^^
    ~ Lainey