That is sad but it is good 5/5
You should maybe make a part 2 or something

Wow.. thats a strong write.. i couldnt imagin that happeneing to me ! so scary.. but you wrote it well.. the only thing is in the first stanza you have a spelling error
it reads 'This is notâ??t a game!'

othr than that great job 5/5
xxx

I really like this poem sad and creepy but that a good thing for a poem like this now im going to look at part to! cant wait to see what it has to say =]

To tell you the truth I am not a fan of these type of poems. But in this case, it isn't too bad. not often I say that. Good job =)

Wow thats sad but its really good 5/5!

* $heila *

Again the questions are relly good. I like your style and the word choice is always great. 5/5 all the way

tc

It is interesting, very interesting.
It had good solid rhymes until the very last stanza, and had a good rhythm.
4/5

I thought it was amazing, very descriptive and it was just great. 5/5

I can tell it has deep emotional feeling in this poem, But I dont see it much different just from a read of anyone elses poem that writes about cutting,

Is not�t you need to edit that within this piece.
The emotions I couldn't feel yet again, to tell you the truth I got kind of bored reading this. I liked the meaning portrayed it was nice and strong so well done with that. You just need to work on portrayed the emotions into each piece. 3/5

Its sad but very nice...always Manda

I really liked this poem. From what I have read its a fav so far of yours. 5/5

I think that this poem is amazingly good. Every line is full with emotions and it is greatly written. I like the ending, topic is interesting and unique. This piece is really deep! 5/5