Great Poem!!! I love the ending! If you get a chance, please check out some of my work!

I also love this poem. But I think some lines are abit random, dont flow onto the next sentence very well and some grammar is a bit wrong.....but I can agree with this, I can easily connect with what you are saying....but how do you know that the love won't fade?? can you just tell? 0_0

=p awsum!!!!
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I liked this poem! :) I also enjoyed the ending with the 3 dots but some of your grammar needs work. Other than that I thought this poem was a good emotional piece.

--Lindsay.

Aww sweet. i like it a lot. youve done a great job on this. the emotions and feelings were nice. keep up the good work.

thanks for the comment on my poem.

OOOH MY GOSH i love this one! it totally reminds me of my boyfriend, quentin:)