I love this poem, i can relate to this perfectly, i absolutely love this poem mandy bear, and nananabooboo, i got first comment on this one too, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

I love it!! wow great work!! the words just came alive when i read it!!

Great poem! It seems really heartfelt. I was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up. 5/5

marcella

This was a beautiful peice. Wow I was capticated by your words. Your flow was not off once and everything was just amazing.
And I love the way you ended it!
great job 5/5
((Amber))

Perfect ending, that's all I can say.

I can relate to this piece, and the ending was perfect. another beautifully written poem.

Amazing poem. Topic is great and you wrote this piece superbly. Second stanza is incredibly good! Atmosphere that you created is also great. You described emotions excellently. 5/5

Excellent poem. Very heartfelt and captivating. All the stanzas are incredible. Wondeful choice of words here and I absolutely love the last two lines. Simply amazing. Great job! 5/5

-Shannon <3

Awehh ! That`s cuute. He better not effing let you fall or else he`ll have a whole heap of broken limbs courtesy of Jenna lol..but even if he does Darling, know that I will always be here to catch you, okay? I love you and don`t ever doubt that !

"I've given my heart up; you've seen my real self -
Just don't hide me away, with the rest, on your shelf."

^^ LOVE those lines, amazed me...as always lol.

5.5
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heartchuu.