Comments : The real You =((

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, take kare xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Do u know what i like about ur poem..
    its comes from heart and goes throught the heart...
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by chiper daniela

    I know this emotions from the poem u have experienced them for real.u wrote beautifully what u feel down the paper

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenInPieces

    Wow really good poem i can really relate and i cud tell u wrote this from ur heart. keep it up 5/5!!! <3

    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was a great poem nice job keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I so agree. I know how you feel, boys are so complicated!!! why can't they just be simple!!!like GEESH!!! lol, dont worry though, it obvously wasnt meant to be....great poem I loved it, keep writing =)

  • That is a very good poem:) Thankx 4 the comment you sent me!! I really do love this poem tho!!! Good job!! Good luck on your other ones 4 the future!

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    I think this poem was very unique and had a lot in it. All I can critique is to maybe watch your grammar. But the poem was absolutely beautiful. Keep it up.
    <3Raych

    and thanks for the comment

  • 16 years ago

    by linderrrxo

    Thanks for the comment i really like this keep it up love always linda

  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    Fantastic job, and there's no need to tell you how emotional it was to read because you know how emotional it was to write. All of your work is powerful, best of luck to yah, you deserve it. 5/5 sweetie

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Touching loverly poem!
    Keep up the good work

    Danielle
    xx

    5/5