I know exactly how you feel when i was younger my dad walked in and life out of my life but then my mom finally told him not to come bak and that was the last ive heard of him and soon my mom remarried and now i have a stepdad who is there for us but sometimes its not the same!
awesome poem i loved it!

Wow i really enjoyed readin this peice, it has so much emotion in it, made me think about things i love, first poem i have read of urs and i already htink your style of writin is good xx

Another great poem
you wrote this awesoemly
glad to of read it:D:D

Keenan

Aww. It was so sweet. I loved it! My fav part was:

Why did you make mommy cry?
Why please tell me why?
Why to you make tears?
They wont go away for years!

There were some typos you should fix. Otherwise, it was perfect.
Full of emotion & very touching.
4.5/5

Take care

Excellent poem.why all the families are same.is our[the kids] fault?we dunno why. they just keep hiding. i know it's painful.

I think you need to tighten up a bit. But otherwise, it was great.

The thing that really engaged me was the questions. I like your style and it keeps readers engaged. I will give you 5/5

Tc
Fsams

It was very emotional, but I think it could have used a bit more description.
The rhyming scheme is hard to decipher, maybe if you used a bit more solid structure.
But yes, it is a good poem.
4/5

I think it was amazing how much emotion you put into the poem. It's really admirable that you can put that out into the world. Very brave.

Wow that was very deep and very emotional..It almost made me cry...lol..

Excellent job with the poem...I liked it...

5/5

Well it was ok. i didn't like the structure, you had long lines and than short lines. try to even out the 2. the rhyming was everywhere. but i thought it was ok. i give you a 4. sorry

Oh wow. When I read this, I felt as if I could relate somewhat...I don't know my real dad. He never cared. And my step dad is worthless to me. I made it this far with a father, I don't need one now. VERY GOOD!!!
Touching...
-Jackie

Wow this poem is so sad, but yet wondefuly written. it flowed really nicely. you have a lot of talent. dont ever stop writing. 5/5

~Kristina