Comments : Shooting star

  • 10 years ago

    by Amanda

    Great job! just fix a few spelling errors. Very nice. Def. 5/5! *thanks for commenting on my piece*

  • 10 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Agrees 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    Weee.wish upon the shooting star n dreams come true: )

  • 10 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem you are a talented writer 5/5 Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    I love this one a lot. It feels like something that has really happend.

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Nice piece, I like how you described such a simple thing so beautifully- then again shooting starts aren't merely simple... Anyway, I like it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiller

    Great poem, I'm not quite sure why but I happen to like the last line "Wishing Upon a Shooting Star" .. Like I said not so sure why=) Keep writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    needs some spell checking but that is all
    you wrote it well
    has a nice flow
    i liked this part majorally
    "It was a shooting star,
    It fell so far.
    Make a wish!"

    it was good:):0

    Keenan

  • 10 years ago

    by katy

    Such a lovely poem babe i love the part..

    It fell so far.
    Make a wish!
    You close your eyes,
    Wishing upon that shooting star

    so beautiful :) keep writin and loved ur flow xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very creative piece of poetry written for a special event that is how to make a wish seeing a shooting star. Correct the mistakes "suck/such" "that sand/the sand" "look p/look up"

    Keep up the good work
    you have the potential

  • 10 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    It needs a bit of spell checking you might want to check it out. But anyways, I like the poem. I thought it was cute.

  • 10 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    You look p in the sky
    What does that mean?

    Otherwise very good! You have a couple errors though. but yet good

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Simple and beautiful. I like the word choice and the flow is good.

    It was a shooting star,
    It fell so far.
    Make a wish!
    You close your eyes,
    Wishing upon that shooting star

    Natural lines I liked them a lot 5/5

    Tc

  • 10 years ago

    by Riley

    Good job, I like it.
    There are some spelling mistakes maybe you can edit, but the poem is lovely.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was really cute, made me smile. The wording was simple but effective, it had a really good inspirational message within it.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Good job. You have a few minor spelling errors, but that doesn't take away from the overall poem. Nice flow.
    5/5
    Ciao

  • 10 years ago

    by Brittany

    I agree I saw the few spelling errors but other than that it was awesome. Fast paced flow.

  • 10 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I thought it was pretty good...It could have been more descriptive though...And lines 3 and 10 has some spelling errors..But I liked this it was short and simple...

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was done beautifully, a few spelling mistakes but hey, they don't really matter. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was cute and sweet, although not what I usually like reading. I felt it had no emotion portrayed into this piece what so ever which lets the piece down and the description lacked. I really was hoping you painted a picture in my head. Overall 4/5 for effort on writing a cute piece.