Comments : I Thought I Knew You

  • 16 years ago

    by katy

    Really liked this one im kinda in the same situation as u are with ur ex i kno how u exsaclty feel babe keep writin tho love them xx

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    We've all been there hun
    love this poem!!!
    well written and pretty steady flow

  • 16 years ago

    by blueknight

    Yeah this one is a well writen poem nicely pnd I have to suggest something if you wouldnt mine, put a little more rhyme to it to make it a very powerful piece, to make the emotion flow well, but then overall ill give 5 for this, keep it up,

    Gene Ross

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Wow great poem love it 5/5 =] keep it up!

    * $heila *

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Gene, I understand your point. It's quite interesting, but I think I'll have to disagree, well, slightly. Poetry and Verse are two different words. Poetry need not to rhyme, while verses do. You've written it nicely, once again. For such a short piece, you've encompassed so much meaning and feelings already. I admired that tremendously. Well, Jen and the guy were going out. And though I act cool and groovy outside, there's a tinge of pain inside. After all... I'm only human.

    Thanks for sharing, m'dear. You captured my heart with this piece. How touching!

    Take care,
    marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Gene, I understand your point. It's quite interesting, but I think I'll have to disagree, well, slightly. Poetry and Verse are two different words. Poetry need not to rhyme, while verses do. So, yeah... Peace much. xD

    Angela, you've written it nicely! For such a short piece, you've encompassed so much meaning and feelings already. I admired that tremendously.

    Well, Jen and the guy were going out. And though I act cool and groovy outside, there's a tinge of pain inside. After all... I'm only human.

    Thanks for sharing, m'dear. You captured my heart with this piece. How touching! (sorry for posting twice!lol)

    Take care,
    marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!
    My mom went through the same thing one time [esp. the drinking part]
    and so i can sorta relate!!
    5/5 -Liz

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem
    Very moving & full of emotion.
    I just think that this verse should be edited:

    you weren't another passing though
    i thought you understood that
    when i told you
    that i loved you

    But it's just my opinion. I may be wrong.. The rest is up to you. Good poem anywayz :)
    4.5/5
    Best of wishes.
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Good poem =D im not sure what to say about the situation tho cuz its never happened to me...so....ya...

    good luck tho

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I am really liking the way you finish your poems
    its awesome
    fav lines
    i know where you are
    i know you're with her
    so i drink some more
    until it's all a blur

    keep it up dear
    you really got the poet's qualities shining in you
    try being creative with vocabulary
    thats what i would advice you for future
    this poem speaks a lot
    5/5 for it

    your friend
    Rohan :-D

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    All the emotion is here, making it an easy poem to relate to. Your word usage with this one isn't as incredible as the last few poems I read. Still, a great read.

    marcella