5/5

That was wow!

Brillaint, I loved it, has lots of depth and meaning, very well potrayed aswell.

Soopa ^_^

Aww.. this is really sad but beaituflly written... the imagery and word choice is fabulous and the flow is excellent..&& i absolutely LOVE these lines "Wandering lost among the crowd."

overall 5/5

Wow. it was sad yet beautifully written. the way you expressed it into your words truly amazing.5/5

Another wonderfully penned written piece by you, good job. Flow was smooth again.. I have one suggestion though.. Try to use similes and metaphors =)

Keep writing! =)

The flow is very beautfiul and the mournful content is really well put together. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Aww this poem was so good. The sadness was just seeping out of it. I loved how describing you were, and how lovely the stanzas just wrapped into one another.

The flow was perfect. Flawless to my eyes. I really liked the last stanza, it kind of just put everything together. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Unique..i can see a different style in this!
same as your old ones..it describes well your ideas

keep it up!

This is amazing. period. :) keep up the amazing work

What a nice poem! Are you really that forgotten? heheh!

Wow this is so sad. I loved the raw emotion in this piece. My favorite stanza is:
"I walk as a shadow.
Empty within this living shell.
From moment to moment.
Alive yet untouchable."

It was so powerful, it made me want to read more. 5/5

That was magnificent, beautiful wording, easy to relate to. Written smoothly, the words went together. It just had a fabulous word flow. Very good Job, and continue to write for years to come, I enjoy reading them