Very erotic. Made me feel like a voyeur, as if I were watching two lovers in the dark.
Nicely written.
Saved to my favorites.

X

This was definitely erotic. it's a great poem..it was very emotional and deep.
even though i don't usually gravitate towards poems of this subject i though this was was done very well.
you have such great talent. keep it up!
--Viola

I'll PM you on this one...it is quite good though I usually don't read sexual poems. :)

X

He he he well nobody can stop him either!!!!!!!! WOW it was great.........you actually feel while writing.......great poetry

Very detailed a really could piece :) only a woman could right that lol

Explicit in a very sensual way. It flows very well which made for an easy read. It kept the readers attention all the way through. Very well done.

This was breath taking.
Each word so erotic, so deep.
The imagery was amazing!
As a person above me said, it made you feel as if you where watching too lover's in the dark.
Excellent Word Choices.
And amazing read,
Elaine.

Well shut my mouth

So very discriptive. Just reading this has my hormones on the rise.

Hold on.. I need to call that special guy to take me to this level of pleasure that you so easily penned out.

Nice job done here.

--Sher

Very nice job indeed!

5/5 Ingrid

Wow..this poem gave me chills lol.... very nice job on this one.

definately 5/5=]

Wow. really good! vivid 1st stanza, really well written. umm... 1st line of 2nd stanza, i think you have a typo. (pleasure'd' without the 'd'??)
really loved it.

Great good i really like this 1