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by ECILA ice Jul 29, 2007
Internet slang /
Crawling away to this scourging heat
Away from the blazing fire of hell
I swear I'll take my defeat
And escape this prison cell
I'll soon walk away from vanity
My feet will tread with assurance
Take full steps away from misery
To this world's cruel hands
Watch me rise from this downfall
See me ascend from this graveyard
Stare at my dying soul
As I fight back hard
Watch me steal back my life
And see me as I breathe once again
For this time I swear I'll strife
From all these hurts and pains
I really like this. i think the simple language suits and i like the flow of the piece.
I think ur poem was good keep up the good work iight
I really liked this one, i dont know why people are giving low votes 5/5
I can *see* a lot room of improvement for this piece.
The piece didn't impress me. I was expecting more than just this. The choice of words were simple but unable to fully express the emotions. I can a lot room of improvement for this piece.