Walking away

by ECILA ice   Jul 29, 2007


Crawling away to this scourging heat
Away from the blazing fire of hell
I swear I'll take my defeat
And escape this prison cell

I'll soon walk away from vanity
My feet will tread with assurance
Take full steps away from misery
To this world's cruel hands

Watch me rise from this downfall
See me ascend from this graveyard
Stare at my dying soul
As I fight back hard

Watch me steal back my life
And see me as I breathe once again
For this time I swear I'll strife
From all these hurts and pains

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  • 9 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    I really like this. i think the simple language suits and i like the flow of the piece.
    Good job
    DnB

  • 10 years ago

    by Angel

    I think ur poem was good keep up the good work iight

  • 10 years ago

    by Kellie

    I really liked this one, i dont know why people are giving low votes 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    I can *see* a lot room of improvement for this piece.

    Sorry..

  • 10 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    The piece didn't impress me. I was expecting more than just this. The choice of words were simple but unable to fully express the emotions. I can a lot room of improvement for this piece.