Wow!! amazing dark poem!!
i loved it!! it was... gr8!!!
5/5
*=)

Wow. it was great i loved it. 5/5, great work

This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted! It was long but I think it was worth reading it, well done. It flowed nicely, good vocab. You should be proud for this poem.

Keep up the good work. ^_^

Nicely worded and the free verse scheme or style is nicely used.

Be happy :)

Tc
Fsams

Amazing poem...flowed nicely...good use of words...i like it.

5/5 from me.

Oh wow...just...Wow. lol. I LOVED it. I love how you put the girl in as she was being sort of tortured in her own regret in front of a jury type of thing. Very nice imagination. =P

I liked the flow, even though there were no rhymes. Free verse usually isn't my type of writing, but it's a good way to get things out. Very nicely done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is a good poem it has meaning my only bug with it if im honest is that it didnt have more flow i think this was the best part of the poem and i wish its energy was throughout

As judgment day soon approaches,
She gathers into the crawling pile of flesh.
The bodies all around her scream out for forgiveness,
As the dark lord now approaches for one last test.

The time comes now for the girl to take the stand,
Pulling away from the grabbing arms of the damned,

but overall a very good read :)

Wow, greatly written dark poem, with powerful message. You created amazing, dark atmosphere through the piece, which is very effective.
My favorite stanza is:

-Whoring out the body for carnal desires,
Leaves the child empty; as shallow as her thoughts.
She killed her friends with words of acid,
Nobody could love a girl with no remorse for actions.-
^ Flawless, the wording in every line amazes me, the most effective stanza.

5/5 from me

I LOVED IT.............

not much else that i can say

5/5

your an amazing writer
keep it up

One word wowthatwasamasing

5/5 very nice