Hey cool poem.. it kinda was spot on to how it will be well written hun

This is a cool poem i like how you based it on graduation! i really enjoyed it this was a very well put together poem!

Nice and easy t understand

Wow this brings back memories

Haha..
well it reminds me of graduation day too..haha..ok uhm same as other to many words in common but its ok..maybe its your style..well its just me..haha..5/5 for it..keep it up

Good job

Very good! i don't know what else to say, the ryhming and everything was wonderful...wow, keep up the great work!

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^^^^ U poem was yukie

GROW UP IM GUESSING YOUR JUST JELIOUS KINIVIOUS SNAKE WHO CANT TYPE FOR S*** AT LEAST SHE HAS THE BRAINS TO WRITE A POEM UNLIKE U UR SYSTEM IS FULL OF DRUGS AND YOU ARE GOING NO WHERE IN LIFE SO BUILD A BRIDGE AND GET OVER IT BECAUSE THIS IS OVER. This poem is awsome kalee

Peace out