Wow that was beautiful.. I didn't even notice that it was long. lol. Anyway it flowed nicely, I like your choice of words. And the title really suits the poem, good job

His hand slowly turns the knob to Satan's door
^^ I love that line.

5/5!

You did very well 0n this, i could see the emotion, i could vividly imagine everything taking place, you described it very well.
a sad, and chilling wrote that was a pleasure to read.
xxx

Wow the imagery is amazing in this poem and the reader is hooked by the time they have finished the first line I usually try and give advice for improvement but this is flawless.

This was long but didn't mind it at all 'coz it was beautiful and flawless... the emotion were realy great! and it was well penned and i can clearly picture out the character in my head.

It didn't catch my eye as quickly as your other poems, but it was still a great write. The vocab helped in alot of parts and overall I couldn't find a favorite line in this one, I liked it all :)

5/5

Quillx

Wow, wow, wow! I love it! This is one of the most powerful dark poems I've read, it's going straight to my favs. You're so talented!
I like this piece from the beginning to the end, everything about it is just... perfect. The wording is excellent, and the flow, too. I like the rhymes a lot, they're very creative. The story behind the poem is very interesting and so sad, which makes this piece very emotional. Truly excellent job on this one!
5/5 from me

Okay, So this piece of poetry had really great imagery, and the emotions were so deep in this one...I really enjoyed reading it though.

5/5

Ur poems show alot of emmotion, i love that in a poem, very nice!