Comments : My Baby Girl (Multi-Stanza Limerick)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Haha, i love this, excellent work..i love the style you used to portray such excitement, great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow this was interesting truck 2nd stanza my favorite 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Great Poem :D 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Yes, there was a jeep I admired
    Her beauty left many inspired
    Many days of fun
    Spent out in the sun
    Her openness always desired

    A good satire on the closed culture of the day. Enjoyed it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Very interesting...I love this one too..I felt like u always have this passion in ur words..honestly u seem like u write with ur heart!!

    a very well penned poem..just one line sounded off for me..but nothin imp
    still deserves to be admired..for u have such a way with words..

    5/5