Comments : Skeleton Tongue

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    You did an awesome job with this title. Love that last line, just perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job on this poetry form. Deep and intense. Formed poetry is much harder than it looks. I have tried a few but not many.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    That was very descriptive and i loved the write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I really enjoyed this poem and I believe it was well penned. Great job and keep up the awesome-ness work ... Lol ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shizuka

    I love this poem. I just love it to pieces. It is just so. . .words cannot describe it. 'claps' Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Excellent poem both for its craft and its sentiment. I'm sorry, however, that you've acquired the experience that has allowed you to write it.

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Another very nice write. i enjoyed your word usage. 5/5 all the best wishes ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    I don't know why,i just like this one..

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Shivers! lol. definitely good.

    Anger and fights often fumed
    Shallow skeleton is the tongues fate

    ^ i don't know why, but i really love these two lines...

    definitely an amazing poem. great word usage.....

    god bless

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very well done and very well penned. I like that style and think I could learn from it. I look forward to more. nice!