I liked the meaning you portrayed behind this poem a good question was asked and I found it to be interesting.
Although I think you used some words to much throughout the piece it made the poem lack a little bit within the flow. Overall a 4/5 good effort. ~mel

I like the subject of this poem but I'm also a fan of love poems. so, yeah. Love the emotion and keep up the good work. Just dont repeat words like you often and the grammer mistakes a little distracting but its okay.

Good poem, again.. yes, you need to pay attention, as mentioned above, to your spelling and grammar, but as with your others, you convey love, and how it can be so pure, or so innocent. Very well done. You have an obvious interest in poetry, so don't be put off by us nagging!! lol. Well done. xx

Ahh a very good write, Like maybe you should put deeper emotions in it and make poem that much longer. Something that blows the reader away. Easy to say hard to do :) But thats my oppinion. I really loved this write. Cute and many can relate to it. Very simple to read and i really love that.
5/5
Keep writing!

Nice poem.
Some faults in the grammar, but besides that I like it. The subject is very good.
I loved reading it.
Take care

This was a sweet piece. Overuse of the word "you", though. Just tone it down a little on the repetition of words, okay?

Good job.

Last line in a poem is poor and it destroys flow. You used word -you- seven times and word -love- fout times, that leaves bad impression.

This is a very sweet poem
xx

Well the first stanzza the flow is a bit messed up beacuse you foced the rhyming.i think the ending is great! well done

You won't lose her. If she feels the same way you'll have a better friendship, if she doesn't she's probably a good enough friend for things to stay the same. Go for it. love it good. don't pass up love.
good poem =)

You repeated the word "you" way to much it through me off alot. maybe if you find others ways to say that it is that person but not use the one word so many times. 4/5 from me, sorry

Nice..,.,heheh..,okay rin basta wag mong ulit ulitin ang mga words na nasa hulihan,.,

The rhetorical questions are really engaging. Thats a very good quality in your poem. I loved tha way its strung. 5/5

Tc
Fsams

I like this poem it's so cute :)It reminds me one of my fav quotes: Somewhere between our talks and laughters, I fell for you. Or something like that.. However, It was great Keep it up.
5/5
take care

VeryGoooood!

5/5
I can SO relate.
message me.i'll tell you dee storie.

Simple and right to the point.
Your emotions are clearly displayed.
I hope she realizes what she is missing.