Comments : Miss You

  • 16 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    This is a really good poem,i know how it feels to lose someone close to you and it hurts.
    you did an excellent job putting down your feelings.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow i love this poem, goodjob and im so sorry for your loss, your poem was beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by the song writer

    This truly is a heart-filled poem.
    my grandmother died a month ago, it sucks.

  • 16 years ago

    by genova

    I really enjoyed this poem and i know its hard cuz ive been though this..
    but ass long as you have them in your heart your never forget them..
    *tears

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job! Very sad piece. It is so hard to lose someone we love. The pain stays with us. Keep your memories close.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by kalene totally fallin

    I like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Nice poem...i've lost someone in my life too so i know the pain that you feel....you did a great job writing about it...

    "I just want kiss your cheek once more,"

    ^^in this line you need to add the word to...
    "i want to kiss your cheek once more"

    good poem though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow...great poem girly! it had a lot of emotion in it keep it up!
    <3 tabi

  • 16 years ago

    by Tomo Takino

    So beautiful, Death is always a catalyst when writing poetry. You right so simple but so pure. i like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsey

    This is really good!
    I'm sorry you have to go through this, but keep writing.
    It will probably help with the hurt.

  • 16 years ago

    by arleny

    That was beutiful. i lost my grandfather a while back but i dont really remember him so i cant imagine what youre going through. i hope writing the poem helped. it was beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I really like this one Katy.
    it's very sweet poem for your Nan. I'm sure she's happy looking down upon you.
    The flow in the poem was good..and the emotion is very deep and portrayed quite well. great work! =] keep it up.
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by emILY

    I really like it! Its full of really strong emotion. Good Job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by phage

    That poem was truely wonderful. i enjoyed the way you described everything. It was also very touching.
    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Reaper

    Wow im sorry great poem :(

  • 16 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Wow really a great touching poem
    well deserved 5/5
    comment mine if u can
    ~TPC~

  • 16 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    I really like this peom, I know how it is to lose someone like that. Anyway good job keep it up!!

    -Josiah

  • 16 years ago

    by DamagedGoods

    This poems is propa sweet
    very good =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Its always hard to let go of those that you love so dearly. Treasure the memories and know that she is always watching over you. Very emotional write, beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    I love this poem...^_^ 5/5