I really like this. The words you used to describe the unattainable person were really quite...amazing. Very descriptive and clear. Great job.
5/5

A sweet poem the emotion is not perticually strong I wasen't sure what to think of this piece 4/5

This was amazing, I really really really liked it. It had such passion and emotion. It was so amazing, you did great!! The flow was flawless, it was incredible.

Confused have you actually fallen for a statue or is that just a metaphor? still again great method and i love all of the enotion and expression that you put into you poems. great job.

Wonderful poem...i sometimes think love is unattainable too....but you never know..we both could be proved wrong some day.

this poem flowed nicely...and everything was just perfect.5/5

I really like this poem it is really good i in joyed reading it i will read more of ur poems tomorrow i have to go to school in the mornin so i am getting of nut i promise i will comment some of ur other poems ok but will u comment mine to

I loved the metaphor you used here. You vocab and the way you put it to use is just beautiful. Great imagery and flow here as well. The poem was really original and I think that made it more appealing too. 5/5

marcella

Very well describing this piece. i think that this poem is unique and beautiful...

keep writing

5/5

I absolutely loved this poem so I gave it a 5. I can totally relate to this..

Been here a time or two and it aint fun, tis another great poem, you have a way with words that captures the reader in pure tranquility, flawless grammer, another 5/5!!! keep up the great poems, and thank you for reading mine, means alot to me!!!