Hmm i dont know why but i really like this one. i wrote one like this before called Baby kill me =] i meant to rate this a 4/5 because its not one of your greatest. but its good :]

Thats amazing. by far the best one i read all day... Keep writing...
xxASHLEYxx

Very nice poem, well written and a nice meaning, my favourite part is definately the second and last stanza.

5/5 Well done and keep up the nice work :)

Really good poem..
Thanks for the comments on mine btw
but great poem
espically the part

So stab me in the heart,
Rip it in two.
Tear me apart,
Make your wish come true.

This poems brilliant!

Wow you did an excellent job with this poem it was full of emotion you can really tell you where hurt bad and im sorry 5/5 <33

Wow, this was intense. The flow was great and made for a pleasant read. Although, the rhymes were sord of simple, the emotion you expressed here made this a quite powerful piece. Also, I liked the repitition of first and second stanza at te end, I think it added a lot of depth to the piece. 5/5

marcella

Michelle, this one is really good but i have seen better ones that you have written

I think this is my favorite of yours...really good job and i could really feel the anger! I thought the flow was great. Keep it up!

This is very powerful. Heartaches are very hard to recover from. I know the pain is horrid, but you wrote it so beautifully.

When my heart aches I cry, but I have never thought of it as a bloody tear. It is a very interesting and magnifiscent thought.

While reading through this it read more likek a song than a poem. Very delicate and powerful. The page actually speaks and takes on it's own form.

It is refreshing when any form of heart takes control on its own and speaks to you from both the page and within.

--Sher

I don't like word baby it destroys flow. You discribed emotions greatly and created excellen atmosphere. Imagery is also superb.
Well done 5/5

Wow u sure do have a gift here..but i agree with dark spirit that i think babe could have been a different word as it doesnt fit as well with the other words!
but all in all a gr8 and wonderful write!
tk care
bree

Whoa thst realy deep...
so much emotion....

5/5

Thats a really good poem. sorry if you had your heart broken. i dont know what the feeling is like, but trust me, if my bf and i broke up, i would know exactly what you must feel like.

i read your profile, and it said if i comment yours you'll comment mine. so please do. thanks.

keep on writing, you're really good at it.

Wow! i can really to really to this poem! keep up the good work. i fell this way almost all the time..

OMG.....I loved your poem, it's like it read my mind about things that has happened to me in the past. Keep on writing, you are a great poet, your work is awesome!!

I like this poem very good keep it up

Beautiful poem, I seem to enjoy dark poems better, and must say this is one of the top five i've read on this sight. wonderful poem. 5/5

So full of anger and hate, your a mad 15 year old...lol :) 5/5

The repitition was very good, that was a perfect way to end it. This has such emotion in it. I love how it is so sad but yet she stays strong. it was a little unbalanced in the beginning but other than that it was an excellent poem. 5/5 <3