I like it though. what made u write it? wat boy u like lol.

So simple and subtle. it was a pleasure to read, the title should be "As i know mine havn't"

5/5 David

Hey hun.. sweet and simple poem sweety.. what made you write like tht????
well like keep saying tell him lol or give him the poems you write... lol or y not instead of wondering if he is looking at you why not turn around and lk at him n smile sweetly lol

Hmm i like this one! it seems we had same thoughts.. sometimes when im sitting alone or listening some music or doing some etc.. thinking my love is he same whats in my mind. well nice expressing ur feelings in here! it merely very understood and clear.. great job 5/5

Aww.
Very cute.
The flow was flawless & the emotions were strong & clear. You're a talented writer, I can't wait to see what you'll write in the future. Nicely done. 5.5

- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Good poem. Short, but clear thought. ousucceeded in delivering the message.

Hey that was a fun little poem keep it up

Its cute..well thinking, thinking makes me sleepy lol..well try to use deep words try not use common words..ok 5/5 for it..i hope more..take care!!

Beatiful Flow.

I loved this, Crushing on someone, being really subtle. Your mind roaring with the possibilities the question's.
The experience is almost as good as actually being in a loving relationship..

You did well one this,
keep it up,
Elaine.

As i read this poem i can't help not to smile not because you did something wrong but you remind me of myself.. very cute poem, i know a lot of people could really relate on this one..great job! But to be honest with you just enhance your imagination and vocabulary to make this poem more alluring and uniquely awesome.. keep it up!

I like this....

simple but sweet..

i read your other ones too and enjoyed them too...

xx