It's very weird that I come across this poem at this time, because it's a time in my life where all of this comes into play and shapes the way I will become. I just recently moved and had a very bad break up, two blows that I did not see coming so soon and so disastrously, but I'm coming to learn that I should let all of these qualities in me take shape and guide me through this; the wisdom I have attained in my 17 short years, the selflessness that I possess, the intuition that I cannot ignore...thank you for writing a poem that has inspired me and help me put all these things together to make myself a better and stronger person. I hold this idea dear in my heart, and it was great to read this right now.

Nice. I think you described Wisdom, well.
I like it. I love the last part " When wisdom, intuition, selflessness, devotion, acceptance, and memories, are combined, life will reward the beholder with the hearts desire." I think it's so nice how you wrote that part. Continue writing. :)

Wow..a poem straight from the heart... i loved it..every word is true... you described everything in this poem so well..i couldnt have do it any better.

nice job.keep it up! 5/5

This poem is so true, i love it
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It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5

What is this type of poem called. Acrostic?
I thought it was outstanding and well written. The message is so important and meaningful, you definitely have a gift. Loved the positive vibe.

Great job.

Cicely

WOW! Meaningful. POWERFUL! Emotional. TRUE. 5/5

Excellent, if only everyone could follow your wisdom here what a wonderful world it would be,very well done,inspirational!

Very inspirational !! great message..nd very powerful

I just read over your work for the first time and for anyone to give you less then a 5 is just utter stupidity. I have been out of the loop around here for some time but your work is fantastic or at least this piece I am gonna have to read over more of your work plz if you have time look at mine and I hope you enjoy it as much as I did yours Plot121

Wow!
you seem like a really good writer.

Woah..