Very beautiful ending, truly great, the last stanza is my favorite, especially the last line.
Keep writing!

Excellently written poem, you created great atmosphere. Very original and touching. I really like it it deserves 5/5

Wow i like it shows that you trully care 4/5

You've put to pen, the thoughts of many. For how can we find the right words to thank those who put their lives on the line for us every day! A heartfelt write.

Fantastic poem
wonderful
love the topic
such a marvelous topic to write about
great job
at first i thought i was just gonna be
talking about how you didnt know how
to honour them
but then the last line made the poem great
it brought goosebumps to my skin
and made me smile hugely
it is really great to see people
care about the people
risking their lives for us
good job
sry for the long comment

Keenan

This is a beautiful poem, the wording id great and it has alot of meaning
xox

I thought it was beautifully written, poems like this make a difference. i loved it. great work. 5/5

I love the message in this poem. It is wonderful to support the soldiers. And I am sure that if they read this wonderful poem then they would definitely say thank you.

-Yvonne

This is a very thoughtful poem, it's nice to see that someone cares for the soldiers, I have a friend who lives in Chicago but he's over in Iraq for four years, very well done.

Very simple. Straight to the point and a great topic. I havent considered writing a poem to our soldiers but you have just inspired me, THANKS 5/5