Comments : Sounding Alarm (Collab with NiClean)

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I love your poems, They hold so meaning and so much emotions, There really a joy to read, Your really good poetry writter, and this piece was just beautiful, yet sad. Very good write...

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Very disheartening, a great write though very sad. Feeling flowing like a waterfall throughout and the flow was great. The first stanza was the perfect lead in, didn't give away too much but set the stage for suspense! nicely done collab. left me wanting more. 5. Balance out capitalization that is all.

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Another great poem.. i love your style. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. this was a great poem. its unique and emotional. i could feel the sadness portrayed into this poem. the only suggestion i have is the consistancy of capitalizing or not the firt letters of the stanzas. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    Perfect rhyming and wording. You really put emotions into words wich is something I struggle for. Another great poem
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow deep and nice for the contest 5/5