Very dark, effective and greatly written. I like the imagery that you created, and your choice of words in this one.
My favorite stanza is:

-I have a demon in my soul,
few people know.
Sometimes it breaks free,
but I am still me.
I try to capture it my friend,
before it hurts anyone again.-

I can relate to this one.
5/5 from me

WOW
some much emotion and power in your writing
we really need to chat sometime

Oh, wow. Such an awesome poem. It had much meaning for me. Thanks for sharing it.

I loved it.. absolutelty loved it!
a great write! keep it up!!
XXXX arun

The intensity and the depth of emotion in this poem is really great... beautifully written...

5/5! :)

Yip .. thts a great one again .. amazing ..simply..

my fav. stanza wud be..

"..I have a demon in my soul,
few people know.
Sometimes it breaks free,
but I am still me.
I try to capture it my friend,
before it hurts anyone again.."

they way you express it is nothing less than phenomenal.. an awesome write

Great Work

~Wake~