If Wishes Came True

by silvershoes   Sep 4, 2007


I wish, I wish I was the sun plunging beneath the weary day
I wish I was a cloudburst, sent to steal your breath away
I wish I was the vibrant sky, causing your wheels to stall
I wish I was your security blanket, cushioning each fall

I wish, I wish I was the life beyond every dying star
I wish that I could give to you the answers from afar
I wish I could sleep inside the moon, a sliver in the blue
I wish that when you looked to me, I could smile back at you

I wish, I wish I was the livid squall, to make you feel alive
I wish I was the safety belt in the beat-up car you drive
I wish I was a playful breeze, tousling your shoe-shine hair
I wish the winding road was me, warning you to be aware

I wish, I wish I was the fog, carving before your wheels
I wish I was a whisper, 'press your toes and life your heels'
I wish I was your latent eyelids lifting in the looming light
I wish my body could replace yours, if only for tonight

I wish, I wish I was the steering helm, rocking ever-true
I wish I was an incline, guiding your passage directly through
I wish I was the trucker's horn, the foot upon his brake
I wish I could be his brain, ticking, 'waiting is a mistake'

I wish, I wish I was a song, compelling you to awaken
I wish I was the second hand, time distant from forsaken
I wish I was a helmet, cradling your head in the collision
I wish I was an arbiter, to declare this night's rescission

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  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh and lol i have the sime title ..just not same subject..don't think i stole it :P i never knew u had a poem with such a title REALLY

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Jane I wish I was your best friend LOL..

    I so much enjoyed this one, was very emotional.. and very rich.
    If i was to pick lines or words i would give u different conclusions..but I will be as general as I can.. Cause some lines showed how faithful u are..
    some showed how caring!..how protective..
    some showed the love u can give..others showed the loyalty in you!.
    Some showed how true u are, and how much you would sacrifice..

    The whole poem actually proved that who doesn't know you, truly DOESN't know you.

    I love everything about this poem..everything..everything!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    It was a very beautiful poem, the descriptions and softness of your words were remarkable.Keep writing like that..
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very well penned peice of poetry. I loved the way it had repetition. The structure as well as the flow was excellent. Your choice of words was good. Great work, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    This tis an EXCELLENT poem, loved it, the rhyme and flow twas perfect, tis a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming jane!!

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