This was really touching. I couldn't stop reading it. It's sad that people really do that over a guy. That was a beautiful poem.

Wow... that was so powerful. It was well written and it flowed to well. The ending was so scary. But your meaning is conveyed so well. You have a lot of talent, and it was still a beautiful write!
5/5

Ouch the ending was so unexpected and I am still in shock. I truly thought this would have a happy ending but BAM you hit me with a shocker. I loved the beginning more then the end only because it help more emotion and the imagery was flawless. Overall, well done *5/5*

This is beautiful yet tragic

It reflects the creul nature sometimes desplayed by Cupid

Well done

I didn't like the ending. For me I thought you could have done a lot more with the end of that poem. I thought it was good and yearning and then I feel like you gave up. Which makes me sad. The poem was really good though and easy to relate to. Flow was good. 4/5