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Jeannie
Another wonderful piece you have penned...Excellent job on this poetry form.
Love Cindy

It seemed much like a fairytale and it was so breathtaking
I especially liked those;

Your love has cast a spell on me
My soul is yours to take

So sweet,
Laura

I didn't like this one as much as I did 'The Night That Sees My Pain'. It wasn't your best but it was still a nice read. The only thing is that some of your lines seemed to long for the rest of your poem and one line was to short. It wasn't a lot, more like 2 or 3 but it did throw me off a bit. Other than that, this poem was amazing. I don't like love poems that well but I think this one is an exception

"its simply perfect, the form, the flow, the rhyme, from the moment I read the title I was, "bewitched" and "under the spell" I got so caught up in this write, it's beautiful and was a real pleasure to read, not one typo and I am a stickler for spelling...."

Thanks for entering this piece into the challenge, it's amazing, you've got so much talent and I enjoy reading all your pieces, but this one is absolutely my favorite. Thanks for sharing this with us....