Very original and creative! great write!

I think that, that is one of your greatest pieces so far.
I love the emotions, that you comunicate out to us mere motals.

That last stanza is my favorite.... it may be dark but its quite passionate.... well done Nyell, I love it!

I liked it......its like saying just give up....

Wow you had so much great imagery in this piece. I really enjoyed it and it seems like such a beautiful fantasy. Your words really pulled me in and kept me reading. Great job!

Wooooooooooooohoooooosh!

*ssshhh* .. * someone might steal this piece*

Damn Awesome ..

"..Hush, my darling, let the silence sing;
Feel the pulse of this substance like your own,
embrace little imperfections of darkness,
let them be your shadow, your other skin.."

@_@ .. Breathtaking , simply..

another great one in the pile ;D
Love your work..

~Wake~

WOW!!! It is beautiful, ending is also very effective, I absolutely love every line. This is one of your greatest pieces, it is going to my favs, really deep and you created some special and very powerful tone. I also like choice of words and you really know how to put your self in to some poem, I am impressed! Well done!

This was a wicked read ty

Excellent!

i love your ideas and the concept of your words!

keep it up!

Wow,I love the last line..Maybe cause I love rain.Anyways Lovin your poem.

Vivid imagery at it's best! A superb write filled with subtle nuances that turns up the heat ... Great piece!

This is beautifully written...i love the imagery you created in this, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader. flow is perfect throughout the piece and i thought the ending was perfect. elegantly written.

Very well done. What stands out for me in the piece is the sound of the words themselves. They sing.

I loved the vocab here and the way you used them was perfect. The poem is very dark and beautifuly penned. 5/5

marcella

That was amazing, one of the best dark poem I have read in a while, well done. I really LOVE your choice of words. the flow was flawless, good job.

You deserve a 5/5!
Keep up the good work.

Wow, wow, wow, last stanza is incredible... You express things amazingly with superb choice of words.