First of all, thank you for the comment on mine :) and i really like this poem, i can relate all to well. I know this isnt exactly the best place to meet new people, but if you ever need to talk. Im around.
I have felt this way before. Having your heartbroken can take forever to mend, the pain is horrible and there is no medication in this world that can rid one of it. I love this piece many, like myself can relate to it, and it has a magnificent flow. keep it up 5/5