Excellent Form and Writing!! I could never do as well with such a structured poem.. but you did awesome!!

5.5**
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Excellent!

i'm not really familiar with this kind of poetry, well for me its great, i think..haha..such for the ideas..their really great

keep it up!

Love terzanelles, and this is one of my favorites that I have read on this site as of yet...you held your compusre in these words and I love that.

"Days Go By and my heart is so sore -
As you're off fighting in this awful war,
Time passes so slowly now that I'm really alone -
Sitting in this place, I guess I should've known."

^^ LOVE that stanza, AMAZING.

5.5
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