Queen Ciao!!
Aww, I like this alot! I can relate so much..a very honest emotion poem. Great work..!

5.5**
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And Thank You For Your Lovely Comment =)

I loved the whole poem! Rhyme and flow were good and the message was great! I enjoyed the way you worded everything. The whole piece was beautiful!
Charisma*

This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow...I really liked your thoıghts..Because they are all so true and everybody can relate to it

My fave lines are;

Broken-down lovers, filled with such lust -
We're both losing the other who we thought we could trust.
We tried so hard, but in the end, we failed -

So beatifully penned;
Laura

Excellent!

Nicely penned, you have transfered your thoughts into it, thats great..and title suits your topic well..

keep it up!

Aweh I love this poem ! The only thing I found off in it is as that the title seemed kind of forced into the poem and the over-all idea of fairy tale was mispercieved...fairytales have happy endings mister ! Lol, great poem though, loved it.

5.5
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Beautiful! i loved it! keep writing and ill keep reading!