Comments : Wal-Mart Greeting (free verse)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was a wonderfully written poem , I enjoy reading poems about nice things people do for others and helping, you did a great job on this,, my favorite lines were:::

    Maybe we can take a lesson from these people,
    And next time we see someone a little different,
    We won't stop and judge them,
    Just because they aren't like us at all.
    We will accept them because they are different,

    good work,,, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Haha, this was great!..little thrown off from the title but its true..great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    The construction and style are fantastic. And it has such a deep meaning and emotion, one can really feel this upon reading it. This is simply an excellent poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Wonderful! it makes me think, and makes me want to do that! =P it was written beautifully too! great job!!!
    5/5

    --**Skye~

  • 16 years ago

    by Patience

    Great poem-> I couldnt help but smile while reading this one. You definitely have a true gift for writing-> it shows when you could take a title as this and create a great message that everyone can appreciate. : )

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    Wal-Mary Gretting

    I love your analogy here it may be a simple metaphor on the surface, but there is a deeper meaning behind this poem. Even though this poem doesn't rhyme it didn't feel like a free verse to me. There was a rythem to it that caught and held me real tight. Thank you for the exelent read.