Wow! I really didn't think you could take a nature poem and make it so deep and inspiring, but you did! It's beautiful. You never cease to amaze me with your pieces, and this one is just so good...really stepped it up a notch. Your fourth line had great imagery!
This comment is for entering my very drawn out contest (due to stress, busy life, emergency room, everyday crap, lol) But thank you VERY much for your entry.
And this poem is incredible as always. And I can't believe how your fans hold out for you like this...poems about life hardly ever get commented on but as always you have the crowd behind you! :) And you know what I say? Good for you! You in every way deserve the fan-base you have. And if you keep writing I gaurantee we'll keep reading! :) So keep it up girl!!!
I don`t remember if I already commented on this, I looked and didn`t see it, but apparently..I already voted lmao..anyways, I absolutely love this, the imagery is very strong and the flow is perfect. I was able to visualize everything that was being said without losing focus. Loved it.