Comments : Thorned Beauty

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. This is one of the best I have ever read for you.
    I found this to be beautifully written and very thought provoking.
    The imagery you portrayed in this is breathtaking...elegantly written.

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Wow, so beautifully written. I've missed reading your poetry which is always so inspiring. Your poems always flow so well, and its so easy to fall into the words and feel the moment.

    Excellent!

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    I love the way you wrote this! A unique interpretation, and very sincere, fluid, and emotive. Great from start to finish.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I love this, the imagery in this is remarkable and I love the overall story that you wrote in this piece, very inspirational, makes a reader think lol. Good job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 10 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Wow! I really didn't think you could take a nature poem and make it so deep and inspiring, but you did! It's beautiful. You never cease to amaze me with your pieces, and this one is just so good...really stepped it up a notch. Your fourth line had great imagery!
    Charisma*

  • 10 years ago

    by BlessedByAnAngel

    Such a beautiful write, its amazing. I loved every bit of it, a wonderfully written piece.

    -Blessed 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    :) Gem you dont have any bad poems do you? lol im waiting for something i can crytisize yet you havent provided anything lol another great poem :)) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved your poem. It was decriptive and it flowed well. Keep the great ones coming. ^_^ 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Wow wow wow! You're going on my favorites from that poem alone. AMAZING darling.

  • 10 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelly

    Woah, amazing, just great, cant, have no more words left lol.
    Honestly this is truely a masterpiece, I loved it. Very deep, and defo gets you thinking, i love it.

    "Yet underneath the gentle exterior waits
    A warrior protecting these heavenly gates"

    Brilliant, sheer genuis, that what you are hee hee.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    (sorry it has taken me a very long time to get you your three comments for winning a conest a few months ago but here i am now)

    i really enjoyed this poem. the wording you used was absolutely amazing. it has such a heavenly feeling to it. makes me smile yet see the truth behind the words. good work dear :-)

    -Terra

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This comment is for entering my very drawn out contest (due to stress, busy life, emergency room, everyday crap, lol) But thank you VERY much for your entry.

    And this poem is incredible as always. And I can't believe how your fans hold out for you like this...poems about life hardly ever get commented on but as always you have the crowd behind you! :) And you know what I say? Good for you! You in every way deserve the fan-base you have. And if you keep writing I gaurantee we'll keep reading! :) So keep it up girl!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I don`t remember if I already commented on this, I looked and didn`t see it, but apparently..I already voted lmao..anyways, I absolutely love this, the imagery is very strong and the flow is perfect. I was able to visualize everything that was being said without losing focus. Loved it.

    5.5
    :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Nebula

    Great Gem, wonderfull imagery. Keeps you reading till the end. I enjoyed it...

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    This thorned beauty teaches a lesson, take heed
    How something so gorgeous evolves from a seed
    Standing so tall, so delicate yet strong
    Standing for love, for whats right and wrong

    So true, a very inspiring and beautiful poem, amazing imagery, loved it :)

  • 10 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    This ... is my favorite or yours!! ^-^
    so awesomely written!
    GOOD JOB! =]

  • 10 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    This was a wonderful piece..you've got talent...this is definitely a mastery of one of many meanings to life.Wonderful!

  • 10 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Wow that was beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I think this is a beautiful poem for a rose and all it represents. I enjoyed those last two stanzas best. The rhyme was well done and didn't seem forced. I think this was very well done!
    *ME*