Wow
perfectly written great poem...
i really loved your word choices and rhyming, keep up the great work as you are really great.

a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it.

Great poem!
flowed amazingly and great rhymes too! not forced in any way!
well done loved it keep writing!!!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I think that this was really well written. I think that there was great description in this piece. Nothing seemed forced and the flow was really well done

An excellent write, short, sweet, and to the point. I loved it. Your wording was good and the flow was outstanding. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Wow, that was amazing... Im speechless literally. It was short and the flow was perfect and just wow. That was truly a great poem. Keep it going you have amazing talent !

Wow that was very good great poem i loved the last two lines 5/5

Now this, This was such a beautiful read. The flow was spot on and din't falter at all and the emotions portrayed were deep which really hit at my heart. Such a capturing piece you have written here which was powerful and strong. You ended this nicely. Great work. Keep it up. 5/5 ~Mel

O_o.
Wow.
I'm speechless.
That has got to be one of the best love poems that I have ever read. Everything about it was just perfect. :)

"Stinging pressure strikes the heart,
Permanently imprinting, a flame does start."

^ Good gracious... I'm envious. Magnificent job. :) Overall: 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Amazing description! It was short, it was passionate, it was spot on. You make all my poems seem like nothing. HONEST.

"Year after year, the fire may fade,
But the coals will forever remain. "

Amazing line for interpretation! Symbolizing that love just as it could fade can not be forgotten! The scars, the memories, are present in the burned coals. You described the flames symbolizing emotions that your heart and insides feel! A parallel hidden in the poem! I LOVE IT.

Magnificent! Outstanding! I am utterly... envious of your poem.

[Voted 5]

_Sam

This poem has excellent imagery mixed with incredibly expressed emotions. I enjoyed in this piece, it is short but very powerful. Whole poem is filed with so many feelings. Well done!

I absolutley love the flow, it had me mesmerized from the beginning, flow and the grammer is perfect, again 5/5!!!