Wow i love this. summer is awesome.

A lovely written haiku.
Very beautiful.
It's hard to believe summer's already over. :(
Wonderful job. 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.

You're very good with haikus. although this one hadbeen fairly bland for me. the others had been better.
still 5.5

It's good. I'm not big on these types of poems but you still did it correctly. I'll give it a four.

Its difficult to make a great haiku. A haiku is so short, with such a rigid structure, it's important to make sure it is full of detail and literary elements. Otherwise it is just a description, as this one seemss. The last line makes it seem unfinished, as though there is more to be spoken. Otherwise the imagry is nice.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I love this haiku. Short but holds so much, and is very true. I liked your choice of words and it really shows why most people like summer.
5/5

-Shannon <3

Excellent Haiku, showing the true creativity of a true poet. The words used are very relavent and cohesive. The poem is really beautiful and as you said Haikus depict the beauty of the nature and so as your poem does :)

tc
Fsams

Nice, very nice
it made me miss summer
good job

Forgot to say 5/5

Sound like the experience of a wonderful, relaxing summer day & happiness is in the air. Very Beautiful!