I'd call it something like "Distant Love". Anyway, that aside, this poem really rocks! 5/5

Na this was so sweet and cute, it was told so simply and thats exactly how it is....

5/5 David

I like the end its a very creative 2 lines.
the rest doesn't seem very original or heart felt meerly words.
maybe you could be more descriptive or use more of your vocabulary.

So sweet!!!So touching!!!5/5!!!

Love above
or show of glove
is a thing we see
that looks like me

Sounds like my life....

i like this poem its awesome =]]

Tami

I liked it all but i liked the ending best the wonder if you're looking my way thing. very good write

your servant:
atticus

This poem i think could of flowed better. it seemed a little forced. but besides that it was an overall good poem.. i rated this one a 4

* Woow i really like how it's sounds ! It's the same thing i'm going through ... Thnaks 4this beautiful poem