Wow this is strong.
They choppy flow made it so much more powerful and I'm totally... awed.
There were some 'eh' points but over all I'm shocked. I really love this!

Thanks!

Thats good...love it...=]

Straight to the point, i kinda like it.
You can feel by reading this that there is a lot of misery and sadness in here.
All described very well.
Good poem

xo angelique

5/5