Comments : Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by Kiss My Sass

    Very nice. you captured the paranoia and the fear perfectly

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    When our thoughts place a picture ,
    thats a gift
    u described that
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by silvertung69

    Your dead on.

    the eyes that you describe,I feel within are blind.
    thank you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    Very good poem.
    great topic.
    wish i wouldve thought of that.
    i voted for it.
    please return the favor. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Kris, an intriguing write. I am sure there is a hidden meaning, or this there....no wait!..

    .....agghhhh (the zombies are everywhere!)

    Michael