Aww, i love this poem. Great job.

Very good job!! I like this one.

Good job gives a really good image of what the character/or you is feeling I like it aot. Good job Keep writting

I love it reminds me of stuff i once had ver sweet

It's very sad and very sweet. I guess we all have someone we wished could stay but they don't. It's all so sad, but at the same time, it's what makes us human. This really is a well done poem. :)

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

I really like this poem..its sad but still very good.