Wow, excellent i loved this, the rhyming works so well here, your word choice is perfect, but the tone and atmosphere you create is what I found most effective. I'm gonna put this on my favourites. nice work :)

A perfect poem about the women the world can't do without.
Perfect rhyme and flow, excellent job.
Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

This was a really deep piece, erotic and interesting from start to finish. I loved the meaning portrayed behind it, It had me captured from start to finish and I didn't bore at all. A poweful and naughty little piece. Well done =]

Wow!!!!! This is HOT! Lol...

I'm kinda at a loss for words right now :) which isn't unusual for me when reading your poetry but this time it's for a different reason, lol.

I don't even know how to comment on this one without sounding like a complete fruit loop, so I'll just say Wow and Awesome!
Whew...