Jeannie,
Oh wow, what a chilling tale. Sadly enough things like this happen every day. You have done an amazing job with the poem as always.
5/5
Kay

Jeannie
Wow what a scary tale. Imagery is fantastic.

Now all the town are looking
For that Raven in the trees
I take the cleaver, from my pack,
And hide it in the leaves.

I didn't expect this ending.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Firstly I would just like to say that I love how you can tell a story. I find that my story poetry doesn't work as well as my cliched broken hearted tales do - so I admire those of you who can write something such as this. It was excellent. There was even a twist to the darkness. Your writing should one day take you to alot of places. Show people what you're made of! Write a book :P