Comments : When A Boy becomes a Man

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    WOW.

    This was such an amazing piece. It truly left me with chills. I could just imagine the pain and saddness the little boy must have endured to see that on a daily basis. And the ending was just perfect, truly blew me away.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    WOW!
    totally love this poem, so dark and chilling! its amazing and im so jelous!! the end was wicked, to two last lines. beautifull ending!

    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow....amazing poem! I loved the twist at the end....it took me by suprise! Very dark and well written....i could feel the sadness the little boy felt....amazing write....keep up the awesome work!!!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    AWESOME POEM FLOW WAS INPECKABLE
    5/5 I LOVE YOUR WORK