Jeannie
What a beautiful and captivating piece you have penned. This is so moving I have read it through 3xs. It touched my heart everytime.

Where now she folds into my arms
Her warmth so tender and so fair
Her love has placed on me a charm
Has caught my heart quite unaware
Where came my heart a broken pain
She caught it fast and held it true
And placed upon my soul a claim
Each second now to be renewed

This stanza just captavated me.
Excellent job!
~CLAPPING~
Love Cindy

Jeannie!

You are brilliant! I am completely short of words to say how this poem hit me!!
I agree with Rob. You are the best!!!

love and luck
shobhana

Truly a beautiful piece! It has a fairytale feel to it, almost like Thumbelina or something. The rhyme and flow of this piece is by far one of your best and I have no suggestions for it. It creates a peaceful environment in my mind that I would love to revisit so often. Great job!
Charisma*