This is a really sad poem. I've been through something like this. The poem has good flow. 5/5

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Way to go!!! keep it up, chica:)

Once again you've written a love poem straight from the heart and I feel your pain. The flow was great and the word choice as well - a couple lines are missing a word but other then that it was excellent - 5/5 GG23

It's passionate, heartwarming and beautiful. It's flow is spectacular. 5/5