Hiya Kris,
What a lovely enviromental poem. We must protect nature from ourselves. We are parasites, big bullies, destroying the un-armed.
Thank you for making me think.
Michael 5/5

Wow this poem is fantastic from d first time I read it....

Best wishes 4 ur futeure writes,,,

Karan

If i could I would volunteer to be a cactus for the day they fight and help them against the sharpe tongues of what some people call progress. I only have one poem in the nature catagory but I enjoy that part of this site quite a bit. I find very good poetry here where they aren't complicated by the words of love that sometimes loose their meaning. Nice write - bravo

Nice poem about nature and how beautiful is it...
I loved the way u described the cactus and ur choice of words was so great...
I think it's kinda invitation to protect our environment bcoz it's so gorgeous..
Good job,plz keep it up..

Its good writing, but I didn't get afeel with it... there was no emotion. Just, cactus

I was in Arizona for a while and loved the cactus I saw. It did hurt to see those that had been, for lack of a better word, harvested to sell to people for their yards. They should be left alone to stand where they are. Well done.