Hey,
an awesome poem, nice choice of words, I enjoyed reading it. I like dark poems and this one is just great;) sorry for the short comment but I don't have anything else to say O.o
keep up the good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

THis poem is different butinteresting. I liked it and wrote it out so well. Keep up the great job. 5/5

Different than the other two but equally as good. I liked your wording and the ending was something that makes it even more understandable. Good job Keenan

Yet again a beautiful poem!