Wow!
I have to mention your choice of words first- It's superbly brilliant and brilliantly superb! lol
Seriously, this piece is one of my favorites from you, it is absolutely amazing. The flow in it is excellent and topic is so original.
I truly admire your poetic skills!
My favorite lines:

-I breathed in the static heresy of twilight,
to fall asleep in the blissful ache of my lullaby.-
^
Something about this touched me deeply...

Whole piece has great descriptions, too.

Keep writing!
5/5 from me

Wow, this was very descriptive and used so pretty good vocabulary. I could feel the emotions dripping from the words. Keep up the good work. ^^ *5/5*

Wow!
I really like the ending, and whole poem is simply amazing. Atmosphere in it is interesting and very unique. I could feel all emotions that you expressed here and the way you wrote it is fantastic.
You should be proud on yourself. This piece is really impressive and I enjoyed in every line of it.
Well done!