Well the first thing that hits you about this piece is just how vibrant and vivid the images you put across are. Such wonderful and intense images really bring this piece to life, considering the topic.

This poem holds a nice, steady flow right from the start; never once faltering from course.

Such a wonderful poem, it makes me question why and how I havenâ??t come across more of your work before.

~Pete.

Beautiful; bleeding emotion.
A tear or two for your poetry; and for the dead.

Wow... this is so deeply touching, with superb tones of sadness... Great poem, with vivid imagery
I like your choice of words and the whole tone of this piece that pulls the reader in the whirlpool of excellently expressed emotions.
My favorite stanza is:

-In the crescendo of graveyard acoustics and midnight silence,
there is no more unnecessary space for regret and patience.
Abandon all the ardent memories and tender words unsaid.
Let the corpses rest in peace and god bless the dead. -

Keep writing!

Beautiful ending, so sad poem it touched me deeply. Still the way you wrote it is amazing and atmosphere that you created in it is fascinating. Every line is so deep and compact, I also like the rhythm you created in whole piece, effective and it holds some superb tone. Sad but excellently written piece.